How do we determine if a painting is good, right, finished?

How do we determine if a painting is good, right, finished?

I never talk or 4-ways-to-paint-an-imagewrite much about my personal artistic musings. I think that that is changing for some reason. Last summer I came to the conclusion that I like myself and always have. And after many years of not being comfortable with my work, I love what I’m doing now.  My time painting has been a quest for some elusive end, some look and message that never seems to materialize to my satisfaction.  Now I jump headlong into the quest and have a grand time messing things up!

A bunch of well established artists (myself included) had a discussion the other day about the differences in likenesses (live model) artists get while painting the same person.  I was asking how does one determine if their work is good, i.e. “right”, if so many variations of the same person are the outcome?  That has brought to light something I think about all the time and encourage my students to think about it also.

If there are so many valid conceptions of the same subject, how do we determine if a painting is good, right and/or even finished?

I have been lately on a tear to redo many of my paintings; paintings that I was most probably generally content with a while back but now seem lacking somehow.  This confirming the point i often make to my students….that there isn’t a right way to do anything in the creative field.  The issue of wh
at’s good….well, that is in the eye of the beholder (especially a buyer) and in the soul of the artist.  Andabout finishing….probably nothing, in the mind of the artist, is ever really a “finished surety”.  We declare them finished, put them in shows or put a price tag on them but is it just me or do others look at their work and say: “I wonder, what if…..”  Or is this just a sign of an immature artist?  An artist that hasn’t gotten all her “ducks in a row” yet

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HONTOE_STEPS_2_3Hontoe_crop-2-waysHONTOE_STEPS_4_5It all started with a demonstration at the Art League of Daytona Beach in Daytona, Florida. This demonstration was “live model”.  The model was a local gentleman (who asked that I call the painting “Hontoe” which he said is Japanese for “truth”). I loved his chiseled face, striped shirt, the quality of the lighting, etc.

The demo started late and so I didn’t have more than 40 to 50 minutes to paint. This image (photo #2) is where it was when we quit.  Actually, I had gotten my point across and was perfectly happy with the results.

After returning home, I apparently felt I needed to add some shapes and interest to the painting (photo #3). So I started playing around with the composition. This is where the painting stayed for sometime while I studied the relationship of the shapes, how one moved around the painting and the harmony of color. or lack there of  Either the blue of the jeans or the turquoise of the tank top proved too isolated.

The mirror frame pressed in too much on the figure’s face and the area behind him was too empty, making the balance heavy on the right side (as you face the painting).  My research had repeatedly pointed out that a painting weighing heavier on the right side can be uncomfortable for any viewer. The logical answer seemed to extend the mirror behind and past the figure’s head (photo #4). This connected the structures into a unified abstract design. In the end, it still didn’t feel “quite right”.

I debated cropping the painting (photos # 5 & 6) which did make the painting more cohesive and brought a better sense of balance and movement.  I liked the bottom choice best. However, I was loathe to cut up the painting before giving all the challenges a go.

So it sat for a while longer as i pondered what to do with the vacant side behind him.

Ah, an inspiration! Why not put something behind him. But what? Whatever I put there would be paramount for creating balance and interest.  What about something breathing, like an animal? Would that be too kitschy?  Would it make the painting “too ordinary”?

Being trained as a graphic designer, I decided to play around with adding a pet behind the figure.  A dog wasn’t easily incorporated into the space allowed.  I tried a cat.  Liked that idea, but the coloring and the cat’s expression just didn’t make the grade.  Not willing to give up on the cat,  it got a more harmonious color and a less saccharine expression.

I was getting very happy with the whole thing and thought it (as I had many times before) was very solid, maybe even competition grade solid.  Wanting to be sure my assessment was on target, I invited very accomplished artists over to for a critique.  One liked it as much as I did….the other one tore it apart!  OK, what to do with that?  We (meaning me) wait, we ponder, we evaluate and we decide that settling for mediocre isn’t our game plan.

But do we know that it’s only mediocre?  That won’t be answered until we play some more.

At this moment, a very crucial thing happened.

I ran across the photo of the painting as it stood at the end of my demonstration in Daytona Beach. hontoe-1st-stepsLooking at it was like looking at something special, something that went beyond where my painting was at this moment, something kinda magical, mysterious; a style I’ve been working towards for years.

Now’s the quandary.   It would be virtually impossible to take this painting back to that point and equally as impossible to recreate the inspiration of the moment.  I did decide that I could try to bring the colors into a more harmonious palette (very different for me as I’ve been all about color, color, color for years), more unifying values and light patterns. The result is not photographing as beautiful nor as dramatic as it is seeing it in person and I’m not sure that I like the blue-greenish tones.  They might get neutralized a bit more towards blue grays. The journey might not be over for this piece of work.  However, before digging into it more, I’m going to enter it into a few juried shows and see what the response is. I love seeing how I measure up with the best of the best….whatever that means! I’ve also learned that if work gets juried out consistently, the artist needs to look either at the quality, style, expertise level or if it fits the current show trends they are competing against. I don’t paint according to trends and my work isn’t the standard selling type of work. We’ll see what happens and where I go from here. Anyway, it’s only a journey.

As it turns out and before any jury show was available and after more input from my peers, the tweaking continued on.  I suddenly saw a brush stroke on his arm that didn’t work.  Instead of painting out that stoke, I added a tattoo to his right arm. The model had asked that I title his painting “Hontoe” which according to him means Truth  in Japanese.  I have a background in Chinese Calligraphy, so I figured I can do a reasonably good job recreating the Japanese calligraphy (for truth) on his arm (note the color compatibility of the tattoo I chose). Tattoo added….I like it!  (Orange didn’t work – looked fake). Brash words were spoken aloud: “I absolutely love the painting now and think the tattoo finishs it off just fine!”

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There was more input, such as: the cat is wonderful but it takes all the attention.  Sooooo, back to the easel.  I reduced the definition of the cat’s eyes and it’s value which caused a need to make a load of big and small changes all over the painting. Fortunately I’m on a crusade; challenging chiaroscuro, painting strong light and dark instead of focusing so much on color.  Have you ever done the” find the 6 things that are different “in the comic section of a newspaper?  Discovering all the changes I made between the last two photos is that kind of a challenge.  How many can you find?

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Now it’s time to end this journey and get on with my next escapade. Every step has it’s strengths and it’s weaknesses.  It seems to all depend on what the objective is:  color – value – lost & found – style – composition.  I am concluding that all that plays a part.  What seems to matter is the artist’s intentions, what makes that artist’s soul sing, and when the song sounds really good.

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Two Football Teams

Two Football Teams

I learned to paint loosely by dividing my approach into two football teams.

Sometimes things just fall into place.  I’m always trying to find ways to explain how I developed painting approaches that gave me more freedom to painting loosely.  The 1st step is “Lemons, Walnuts, Rice and Water” which is covered in another blog.  This step is the foundation for painting loosely.  Here I cover what I do after I get a thumbnail designed in 2 or 3 values.

After that I depend on an understanding of the difference between painting a drawing (often seen as doing realism) and creating a painterly piece of work (is more in line with Impressionism and/or the abstraction of elements).  Realism describes objects as they are.  Impressionism and abstraction has no loyalty to a recognizable image.

What works for me is to start with the football team of realism, placing a very loose drawing on my paper or canvas, using only as much detail as is needed to understand my subject.  Then, with my thumbnail (small composition design) at hand, I throw the football over to the impressionist/abstract team and blow away as much of any recognizable areas as I can get away with.2-football-teams The best way to paint loosely is to have a PLAN!

This is accomplished through THUMBNAILS.  What thumbnail planning does for you is give you the freedom to choose what you want to put into your design and what you want to eliminate without painting and repainting the actual work.

I rarely find a scene that is “picture perfect”.  And since I have an adventurous nature, I like to be very creative with my work.  This means I will take subject matter from different locations to include in the work.  This is tricky.  Whatever is inserted needs to look natural and of similar ilk and light source (if I’m working with a realistic approach*).  Work on consolidating compositional design shapes into simple 3 value areas (crossing over subject matter and the tendency to focus on details rather than design).

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Take the sketch and make a thumbnail in 2, then 3 values.

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You will have a plan for your painting that tells you were all your value shapes are.  You can blow away the color all you want, as long as you keep to the value design (and not the individual objects and/or details).  And you can change items in the design to make new scenes.

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Why Boxes

Why Boxes

It all starts with boxes.  In my many years of painting (over 40) and nearly as many teaching, I have discovered what 90% of the artists I worked with (and myself) stumbled over; what gave us the most grief.  These points are covered in my workbook “What’s It All About”.   There comes a time when we paint, that we figure out it isn’t about painting inside the lines!  It’s about exciting compositions and the interplay of values and shapes, created through shading, color and texture that make amazing works of art.  What we ultimately realize that we are building  the images in our paintings without depending on the drawn line.  That leads to a recognition of how well do we understand how to build our images with paint, instead of depending on the drawn line to describe an image.  Which leads to the question of how well do you understand how to build the structure you’re painting?  If you’re painting realism, dimensional form and perspective are all wrapped up in everything  architectural in our world today.

And everything architectural relates back to boxes.  Tackle boxes, of all shapes and sizes, and you’ll get a better grasp on building that nostalgic house or town you discovered not too long ago.
Stop into Michael’s Art Store or Hobby Lobby and pick up some (very affordable) boxes and starting drawing them.

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And guess what?  You’ll be able to do complex structures.  After that, learning to do the same thing in paint alone.

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Think about shoes and/or hats.  They’re boxes too.  Laces and straps, high heels on shoes, ribbons and flowers on the hats, come from knowing what to do with ribbons (http://maggiemcclellan.com/2016/08/why-ribbons/).

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Why Ribbons

Why Ribbons

Ribbonribbons-with-arrowss teach us how to draw and/or paint everything that’s organic.  Things that twist, roll over, bend, fold….all those amorphous shapes that we encounter when painting fabric, hair, waves, birds wings, flowers and leaves, the twists and turns that tree branches take….I could go on and on.

 

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When we fully understand how the edges of a ribbon functions to describe the loops and bends, we’ll be able to create beautiful folds, waves…..folding leaves, curving – bending flower petals.

 

 

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Boxes Grow into…..

Boxes Grow into…..

And the purpose for learning how boxes function grows into more complicated shapes.  If laying a box down flat on a table or receding in space, then doing these
exercises will be a huge challenge.

Perhaps I have gotten ahead of myself, or left out a step.

Everything we draw begins with 3 simple shapes….3-basic-shapes
learn to identify these shapes within anything you are trying to replicate (i correct proportion) and you can create very complex structures accurately. Check out my Drawing Workbook .

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As we get more and more confident about increasing the complexity of our objects, we notice that the
two “P”s – PROPORATION & PERSPECTIVE  come into play.

“Observing and translating the relationships between the various shapes and objects, one to another and to the picture plane, will give you proper proportion and placement. The odds of reproducing your compositional design correctly dramatically increases the more accurately you observe, interpret, and translate these relationships.”  That’s a Maggie quote.
Whew, what a mouthful, but truer words were never spoken.

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Getting the right proportion of one thing to another is so valuable to making a really solid composition. The basics of good composition is abstraction, breaking things down into simple shapes and values.

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More about that later!

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These are a set of boxes that fit one into the next (like the Russian dolls).  Try this.  You can get the boxes at Hobby Lobby.

 

 

 

And now about perspective!

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I’m always on the lookout for things that are readily available to learn from and, I don’t know about you, but I always find there’s cardboard boxes in my life.

What great instructor’s they are for perspective.  All those flaps going multiple directions.  Oh, yeah! Just try it.  Put a really strong spot light on them and limit surrounding light so you see only light and dark shapes.  cardboard-boxes-1

See the painting at the bottom of this blog.  It’s one of my favorite from my “Painting Puzzles” collection.  PS: the cardboard   box is not the only box shape in this painting.  The bench is 2 boxes…one on top of the othercardboard-boxes-1cardboard-boxes-2.

And this takes us into how I learned to paint loosely….what most of the artist’s that seek me out what to know.Tune in for my “Two Football Teams”….my next blog.

Enjoy tackling boxes!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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